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Sunday, 30 June 2019

Show... Don't Tell



Verse 1

My heart is shattered into a, (million piece x2) million pieces.

Shattered like glass, laying (on the ground x3).

No-one can fix this (broken heart x2).

On-one but you.



Chorus

You where there one day gone the next

I hope that one day I will see you again.

Not too soon I will see you up-above

It's hard without you.



Verse 2

Your gone and you took a piece my my heart with you.

It's gone, gone with you.

I don't mind that you took it with you.

I just wish I knew when you will fix it.



Chorus

You where there one day gone the next

I hope that one day I will see you again.

Not too soon I will see you up-above

It's hard without you.



Verse 3

My heart is a black hole.

In the middle is the hole where you took a piece of my heart.

It's taking everything with you.

My happiness, my light, my memories.

Everything is escaping me going out looking for you.



No-one can fix this broken heart.

On-one but you.



Can you guess which emotion I choose. You will never get it!

1 comment:

  1. Tia
    Great work. I like the way you have focussed on that 'show don't tell' approach, it is the secret to great poetry. Perhaps musicians are in fact our 21st century poets?

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