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Tuesday, 5 April 2016

Goodbye Summer, Hello Autumn Poem

This week we have been writing autumn poems called goodbye summer hello autumn.
Here is mine

Goodbye colourful summer dresses and flowy skirts, hello warm jumpers and jackets
Goodbye frosty ice, ice blocks and ice-cream, hello tropical creamy pumpkin soup
Goodbye swimming in the cool outside pools, hello delightful inside games
Goodbye annoying flies and bits, hello amazing bit free days and nights
Goodbye helpful and divine sun hats, hello beautiful gumboots
Goodbye splashy water fights, hello leafy leaf fights
Goodbye bare feet inside, hello warm slippers
Goodbye green leafs, hello brown leafs
Goodbye summer, hello autumn.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tia. I'm Lauren. I'm just wondering why you wrote this wonderful poem. I also wrote a Goodbye Summer, Hello Autumn poem. There is only one thing I think you should improve on, you should talk more about what you have been doing. Apart from that,I loved it. If you would like to see my blog here it is-shslaurena.blogspot.co.nz
    Keep up the good work!

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