My Epic Gift

This term we are learning about persuasive writing. This week we wrote persuasive writing to make people get a stick. Here is my writing.

Reasons

Elaboration

Persuasive Vocab

My Epic Gift

Would you like the a fantastic gift to give someone? Do you want to be the envy of your friends? Do you need to get out of annoying situations? Then I offer you my 100% raw, natural stick and 100% more sticky that a normal friend. Did you know that they can help you,  help you win races and keep you company?

Did you know that sticks are good at helping you? Do you wake up most mornings and find that you just can’t get your hair the way you want? Well I have the solution for you. You can poke your stick through your hair or behind your ear to take others eyes to the stick instead of your hair. Also they can be lots of other different things. They can be a wand like Harry Potter’s, when you wave your wand you can go anywhere you want to be. If you have annoying siblings you can trick them into thinking that you have a piece of gold in the shape and colour of a stick but instead it’s your stick and that it will turn back into gold if they are quite. They are also stick-tastic pals.

Secondly they can help you win a race. Do you come second or third or fourth in every race you run in? Then bring your friendly stick! You can win by a bud! They are very fast and speedy. Discover the add speed of the stick with you. They also can help you win the race by encouraging you and sticking with you. You deserve a friend like that! Do you love friends like that? Your stick is that lovely friend.

Lastly your stick can keep you company. Did you know that if you have a pet dog or cat they will play together so you don’t have to worry that your little furry friends aren't missing out on fun? Your stick will also stick with you through thick and thin. They will stay where you put them so you don’t have to worry about them. Which is fanta-stick! They aren't pal-stick so you know they are really there for you. They are all original just like you! They are the ultimate friend. They are the one of a kind friend.

Therefore, I think you should get a stick because they can help you,  help you win races and keep you company. Run, don't walk to your nearest tree or bush to get your stick-tastic buddy, but remember don’t go picking them off trees or bushes because they are still growing with their brothers and sisters. Get one from the ground!